I really liked your persuasive piece for businesses. I can obviously understand why Miss Duckworth picked you for the blog. I really liked the way you gave examples to back up your statement.
You did back up all your points very well. I could understand each sentence clearly. No wonder your teacher chose your piece to be put up on the blog.
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